A sense of place

Place in fiction is so much more than setting. Think of the mean city streets of detective noir, the high moors or lonely cabin, the claustrophobic sailing ship or space station, dusty country roads, wide wheatfields, dark London alleyways, vast oceans or skies, Highland villages and German forests.

Hovea montana, overlooking the Kiewa Valley
Kiewa Valley – bushranger research

Place is atmosphere, it’s mood, it’s possibility. It’s not a backdrop – it’s also society, community, class, trade, faith, ritual, food, textures, conflict. A place helps form the people in it. Characters in fiction are who they are, who they become, for better or worse, because of where they are, how they live, who they love or don’t, how they grew up, what they believe. As writers, we have to imagine and recreate the world for them.

Place is people, which means it’s also plot. The things that happen to people in a story are often influenced by the world the author has built for them. It might be social expectations of marriage (Pride and Prejudice, My Brilliant Career) or devastating circumstances (The Hunger Games), compelling characters in an everyday world (Heartstopper, The Murder of Roger Ackroyd) or extraordinary people and creatures in incredible worlds (Lord of the Rings, The Left Hand of Darkness).

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A masterclass in writing place, and one of my favourite books, is Leo Tolstoy’s War and Peace, with its virtuoso moving between worlds: from the joyful chaos of the young Rostovs to the Ibsen-like stifling routine of Princess Marya, trapped in a country house with her dictatorial father; from a riotous gentleman’s club in St Petersburg to a soldier’s campfire in the forest or a quiet conversation between two prisoners; the battlefield of Borodino, to a grand ballroom, to a convoy of refugees. People often don’t realise this is historical fiction: he’s writing about his grandparents’ era, not his own.

Tolstoy had his own class biases, of course, and his overwhelming admiration for the “Russian soul”, but his research and specificity are unsurpassed. Sure, we probably don’t all rejoice in the many pages of discussion around contemporary Freemason philosophy, but if a character is obsessed with it, as Pierre is, we need to know what’s going on in his head (anyway, I just flick over those pages now when I reread). His love for the soul of Russia doesn’t extend to the serfs on the Bolkonsky estate, but he too is a product of the world he creates so vividly. Napoleon watching the fires roaring through Moscow, General Kutuzov weeping over battle casualties, the little dog howling in the snow – every image is memorable.

We aren’t all Tolstoy, and we don’t need to be. But as writers, we do need to create a sense of place – wherever, whenever and wherever it might be, to enrich and perhaps even drive our stories. It matters more than we know. I spend a lot of time and thought on creating a sense of place, so my readers feel how it might be to walk through bombed-out London streets or the stables at Versailles, ride the Victorian High Country or enter a printer’s workshop in Venice.

Which is why I’m teaching a full-day workshop on writing place and building worlds soon – on 17 October, in Melbourne. You can find out more and book here.

Season’s greetings

It’s summertime here, so we’re buckling down not only for festive celebrations of various sorts but also for bushfires and heatwaves and all the true delights of summer (sandy togs, ice cream dripping down your fist, long light evenings, cicada song, cricket on a distant radio – although that’s a sound that’s dying out). I have sunburned feet already after a day messing about in boats.

I’ll be kicking off the New Year with a bit of a holiday in my other home – NZ, then working on a couple of writing courses and a retreat, before Miss Caroline Bingley, Private Detective launches in early April.

I hope you’re enjoying your summer/winter/wet season break, if you have one, and any celebrations. Stay safe and happy reading.

See you on the other side!

Image of sunset over sand and distant waves, with spinifex grass growing up.
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Classes & retreats coming up

I love teaching, and especially love teaching writers. My first full-day masterclass, on How to build a heroine, happened last month and it seemed to go pretty well. I have a few more in the pipeline, and big plans for next year.

All the details are on my New Page Writing website.

Coming up soon are:

Next year I’ll also run masterclasses on historical fiction, Scrivener, writing YA, and a new weekend writing retreat on creative practice and creativity (and relaxation!).

So that’s all keeping me out of mischief.

Although I do like mischief…

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It’s a new page for me

Around this time last year, I retired from full-time teaching at La Trobe University (though I’m still hanging around – they can’t get rid of me).

Since then, I’ve been writing (a lot), travelling (a lot), walking (quite a lot) and planning.

And here’s what I’ve been planning: a series of writers’ retreats and masterclasses. I’ve called it New Page (see what I did there?) and it will include one-day in-person masterclasses, weekend retreat intensives, and short online courses. You can read about it here.

I’m delighted to kick it off with a subject close to my heart, and my writing: How to build a heroine.

Modern fiction is filled with fabulous, feisty, funny girls and women making their way through the universe. How do writers imagine them and bring them to life on the page?

Of course, the concepts and skills you’ll learn can be applied to a wide range of characters in fiction.

21 September, all day, in person, North Melbourne (Australia). 

Bookings are essential because I’d like to keep the class size small.

All the details are here.

If that sounds like something that interests you, do please get in touch. Otherwise, stay tuned for updates on coming events and writing retreats.

What. Fun.

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