How publishing happens

People – especially emerging writers – often ask me what happens when you publish a book? How long does it take? Can you say you don’t want to change anything? Do you get any input on how it looks? Don’t you resent being edited? (Short answer: no, I love it.)

Well, here’s what usually happens in traditional publishing (and is happening right now, for Miss Caroline Bingley, Private Detective):

First, you write your book. I know that sounds silly, but plenty of aspiring writers worry way too much about getting published before they’ve actually finished the thing. I get that. It’s scary and also exhilarating to think you might one day publish a book, but you won’t publish anything at all if you don’t write it first, and make it as good as it can be.

Second, you pitch your book. That’s a whole topic of its own so I won’t bang on about it, and anyway I leave that to the experts nowadays – my fabulous agents at Jacinta Di Mase. They know what they’re doing, and they do all the hard work.

Then, once you have secured a publishing contract, your publisher’s processes kick in.

Editing rounds

So, you get early feedback on the manuscript from the publisher. These might be queries about plot points that miss the mark somehow, or about character development or voice: the big questions that an expert eye picks up, from someone who really cares about the book. Your publisher also knows what else they’ve got coming out (maybe similar titles, or in the same genre), in general what other houses have out, what the market’s doing, and what readers expect.

You have a think about any issues they’ve raised, respond accordingly with any amendments, and submit your final manuscript. Your book is given a slot in the publishing timeline which gives everyone enough time to work on it, but also aligns it with overall strategy (eg, not clashing with another similar title, lining it up for Mother’s Day or Christmas sales, hitting shops at the right time for its anticipated readers). At this point, your agent or publisher will start pitching it elsewhere – for translation rights, or adaptation.

Then there’s a structural edit. This may be done by an in-house editor or outsourced – either way, it will be done by someone who knows their stuff. They focus on big structural issues like character and plot, and their fresh eyes can pick up continuity errors or variations in voice, for example. They might recommend structure or plot changes, or point out the need for more clarity. Often they ask questions rather than edit – they leave the resolution up to the author. I’ve never had a serious argument about anything significant with an editor or publisher, and find that questions are usually insightful and all about making the book better.

Ideally this feedback also includes any outstanding issues from the publisher. In the case of Miss Bingley, our publisher, HarperCollins, brought together any feedback from all three publishers who are releasing the book (Australia/NZ, UK and US), plus the editor’s notes. And as the book is co-written with Sharmini Kumar, the two of us had to go away and figure out what we thought about anything significant, and we both went over the manuscript again to make any changes.

By this time, generally, you’re pretty sick of reading your novel, but again, you read through it all, correct any errors and give thanks they were discovered early on (!), and again amend the manuscript to make sure it works for you and the publisher.

But there’s no rest for the wicked, since after that comes the copy edit. Again, this is done by a professional editor, in-house or outsourced, who goes over the manuscript word by word, line by line, noting any errors (simple things like missing words or typos) and making suggestions about anything they find – might be word choice, sentence structure, the rhythm of a scene, overall pacing, dialogue, plot – anything. And when it’s historical fiction, they also ask questions like, “are you sure that type of hat was worn that year?”, to send you scurrying for your research notes (they are usually right to ask). And again you go through it, word by word, line by line, accepting their suggested changes, coming up with your own solutions, or flagging things for further discussion.

Pages of a book rolled over
Photo by Rahul Pandit on Pexels.com

The look of the thing

By now you probably have some cover concepts presented to you. It happens sometimes that authors hate their book covers, but I think it’s pretty rare, since publishers want you to love it. After all, you have to sell it too. Sometimes you get a few options to choose from, and sometimes they design different covers for different publishing territories. Whatever happens, I always go into the process knowing (from years working with designers in print media) that it’s someone else’s creative process, and I respect that. By the time it gets to you, a lot of people have worked on it, and they know what they’re doing, but you usually get a chance to make suggestions as well. (A confession: I asked for more arm muscles on the Julie figure on Goddess! Got knocked back on that. But that was such a gobsmackingly gorgeous image, and cover, I was very happy. And anyway, it wasn’t her sword arm.)

Image of front cover of Goddess

After the copy edit, your changes are incorporated, there may be a bit of back and forth about little things, and then the book is typeset. Yes, we still call it that. Every book has an internal design, even if you don’t really notice it, with creative decisions on typeface, chapter headings, drop caps, etc. This is the critical stage, because after this, it’s hard to change anything major.

Once it’s typeset, everyone proofreads it, over and over, even though by now you never want to see the bloody thing again. For some books, there’ll be a slightly different edition for different territories – the main issue is US spelling for that edition.

For each of these stages, you’re on a deadline and so are all the people behind the scenes at the publishing house. So be kind to anybody who says they’re proofreading or working through copy edits. They may have letters dancing before their weary eyes.

While this is happening, advance reading copies (called ARCs – without your final corrections) go out to booksellers, reviewers and journalists. So this is the first time your book is out in the world, even though it’s semi-secret and may contain errors. These early copies are for people who need to know in advance what the story is, who it’s for, and what they can do with it – order a million copies, set up interviews, book you for festivals, or get ready to review when it hits the shops.

And from then on, it’s in the hands of the publisher’s sales, marketing and publicity teams for pre-order, then promotions and sales to booksellers. And eventually in the loving hands of your readers.

All of that, in the case of Miss Caroline Bingley, Private Detective, will have taken about a year and a half, from contract to publication in April 2025.

We can’t wait to get her into your hands.

Coming up: Mysteries with History

Graphic advertising Sisters in Crime event 13 October - details below

I’m so pleased to be hosting the next Sisters in Crime author panel on Friday, 13 October.

The Mysteries with History panel is a cracker, featuring novelists Alison Goodman, Nilima Rao, and Margaret Hickey. We’ll talk about writing historical crime, creating characters, and the ways the past so often bleeds (pardon the pun) into the present in crime fiction.

I’m even more pleased that Sisters events are back in the swing after all those months of lockdown video events (though they are still doing plenty of new video too).

Mysteries with History is on October 13, 2023, 6pm – 10pm at the Rising Sun Hotel, cnr Raglan Street and Eastern Road, South Melbourne. You can either come for dinner and the show (!), or there are limited places available for the panel section only. There’ll be the legendary Sisters in Crime raffle and then the annual general meeting happens straight after the Q&A with the panel.

Details and bookings here.

Coming up

I’m really looking forward to a couple of events on the horizon.

Writers Victoria

First up, on 10 September, I’m running a workshops for writers on speaking about writing. We’ll focus on preparing for interviews, facilitating and participating in author panels and events, and basically being in the spotlight. It’s something writers don’t talk about enough.

That’s a Writers Victoria workshop happening in-person in Melbourne. All details and bookings here.

Historical Novel conference

Coming up in October is the wonderful Historical Novel Society of Australasia conference, an event I always attend and always enjoy – and where I always learn a lot.

This year, it’s a hybrid format, with in-person and online events to ensure accessibility.

And I’m delighted to be kicking off the conference with an interview with conference Guest of Honour, Melissa Lucashenko – for my money, one of Australia’s finest writers. Her new novel, Edenglassie, is set in Brisbane in the 1850s and it’s out in October. I’m really looking forward to talking with Melissa about her work and her first foray into historical fiction.

The conference, with a packed program, is on 21 and 22 October in Sydney.

Lately I’ve been…

Haven’t posted for ages, sorry. I think the pandemic ate my brain.

Don’t know about you, but all through our many lockdowns I found it hard to read, hard to write, and hard to focus. My teaching work has been demanding, with the sudden shift to online and everything else going on (remind me not to volunteer to write any more academic articles this year!).

But I have been chipping away at a few writing projects and right now I’m on my Creative Fellowship at Varuna, the national writer’s house, so I’m ploughing through stuff.

Front view of Varuna writer's house
Gorgeous, wintry Varuna

Here’s what I’ve been working on lately:

Fine Eyes: Miss Caroline Bingley, Private Investigator

I’ve told you this before, but I’ve been collaborating (for the first time) on an Austen-inspired crime novel, with playwright and Austen expert Sharmini Kumar. We’ve had great fun testing out our Regency research and plotting mysteries, and we’re nearly done. I know a few people who write collaboratively, and it’s been such an interesting way to work – especially during lockdown.

Wildfall

Wildfall is a YA historical fantasy novel – I mean, it’s fantasy, set in an imagined world, but influenced by the history of eighteenth century Europe. Sort of. Except with giant eagles. I’m in the late stages of drafting.

Roar

What I’m working on here at Varuna is Roar, a YA novel set in the 1980s in London and then in Africa, and especially Apartheid-era South Africa. I wrote a solid draft a while ago, on a May Gibbs Trust Fellowship in Canberra, and then undertook another round of research in South Africa, but then had to put it aside when the pandemic struck – like just about everything else. But I’m enjoying revisiting it now, and hope to have a final draft by the end of my time here.

Lion on a high hill
Lion – Pilanesberg National Park, 2019

They’ll be a while yet, but I can’t wait to share these novels with you.

Coming soon: February & March 2020

The past couple of months has been both hectic and diverting. I had a couple of weeks in the UK, attending the Herstory Reimagined conference and researching a couple of projects.

Then I had an actual holiday – a couple of weeks off in my second home, New Zealand. What a relief. I hadn’t had a break for such a long time.  There was lots of ocean staring and eating fish and chips on the beach (it’s summer here, in case you’re wondering), swimming and even fishing. I also bought a little dinghy, which is the cutest thing ever.

small yellow boat

And I, like everyone, was stunned by the impact of the bushfires, so pitched in to help support the amazing #AuthorsForFireys fundraiser, which raised over half a million dollars for firefighters and recovery.

Then it was back to business, finishing Vigil, book three of The Firewatcher Chronicles.

I feel a bit odd, bringing the series to a close. Book 2, Phoenix, comes out in February (so, like, soon!) and Vigil is slated for July. Can’t wait to get the books into young readers’ hands.

Three new book covers

Stay tuned for more on Phoenix as we get closer to release day.

In the meantime, here are my next appearances in Melbourne and Auckland. If you’re around, I’d love to see you there.

4 February: Josephine’s Garden

In conversation with the lovely Stephanie Parkyn to celebrate the release of her new book, Josephine’s Garden. It’s a historical novel, set in France, with Napoleon and gardening and even an emu. What’s not to like?

Details: The evening is at Earthbound Café, 5/266 Bolton St, Eltham, and hosted by my friends at the Eltham Bookshop. 6.30pm until 8.00pm, Tickets $40.00 which includes a copy of the book and refreshments. Prepaid bookings are essential – phone 9439 8700.

(That’s Eltham in Victoria, not Eltham in Taranaki.)

14 & 15 February – Same Same but Different Festival

I’m delighted to be participating in this year’s Same Same But Different festival in Auckland – the brainchild of the dear, departed Peter Wells. This year’s theme is Writing Queer Worlds.

I’ll be one of the speakers in the Opening Night Gala on Friday 14 February, so come spend Valentine’s Day with us. Starts at 7.30pm.

Then the next morning (10.30am), I’m on a panel about writing queer-themed books for kids and young adults.

The other guests in these events, and throughout the programme, are absolutely brilliant, so we’re in for a treat.

Here’s the programme and all the details.

21 February – Sisters in Crime: The past is never dead

I’m hosting a panel of crime writers whose books are set in the past: Sulari Gentill, Kirsten Alexander and Kirsty Manning.

Looking forward to discussing research, plotting, mysteries, crimes of many kinds, character, and writing practice with this stellar line-up.

Sisters in Crime nights are always good value and this will be a cracker, if I do say so myself. (I’m also a Sisters in Crime convenor this year.)

It’s at the The Rising Sun Hotel , South Melbourne, 8pm – 10pm, and we usually get there a bit early for dinner upstairs from 6.30pm. Tickets are $10 – $22, and you can book online here.

10 March – Suffragettes and philanthropists

So pleased to be part of this panel at the gorgeous State Library of Victoria alongside Celeste Liddle, Dr Carolyn Rasmussen and Carolyn Fraser hosted by Santilla Chingaipe.

Here’s what we’ll discuss: At the turn of the 20th century, Australia was an international exemplar of progressive welfare reform. Philanthropists like Janet Lady Clarke built a strong foundation for social welfare; suffragettes like Fanny Finch, Vida Goldstein and Doris Blackburn ardently fought for equality for women.

But the 1902 Commonwealth Franchise Act only granted white Australian women full and universal suffrage. As Clare Wright says in You daughters of freedom, ‘This racial qualifier takes a good deal of the gloss off patriotic gloating.’

My Creative Fellowship at the Library in 2017 was  focused on my project Sisterhood, on that generation of suffragettes around Vida Goldstein (and my great-grandmother, Edith) and then later in the 1980s. I’m still working on that, and will be for some time. So I am keen to hear these amazing women’s perspectives on the issues.

Starts at 6pm in the brand spanking new Conversation Quarter in the Quad – all revamped and ready to go.

Free but book here.

21 March –  Learn how to write historical fiction with me

People often ask about my classes, and there’s one coming up. I’m teaching one of my full-day workshops on writing historical fiction for the good folk at Writers Victoria. We’ll cover:

  • Expectations of readers and writers of historical fiction
  • Practical approaches to voices and dialogue
  • Research tips, sources and tools
  • How to integrate research and imagination
  • Writing about real people from the past.

Writers Victoria, all day from 10am. Details and bookings here.

That ought to keep me out of mischief for a bit. (I know what you’re thinking – I always say that, and it never does.)

 

Vida Goldstein

Suffragette and anti-conscription campaigner Vida Goldstein (Photo: State Library of Victoria)

 

Coming up

We’re hunkered down for winter here in Melbourne. Especially me, as I’ve managed to come down with a boring cold and my head’s too thick even to read.

But the good thing about winter in this neck of the woods is that it’s writers festival time.

So here are a few of the events and classes I’ve got coming up.

Woodend Winter Arts Festival: June 10

A panel with Robert Gott,  Eliza Henry-Jones and Mark Brandi, hosted by Kate Cuthbert. We’ll read a bit and talk a bit and answer your questions.  It’s help to celebrate 30 years of Writers Victoria, our wonderful state-wide writers’ organisation.

Details here.

Emerging Writers Festival: June 29

One of my favourite writers’ festivals, because it is for writers, and it’s always innovative and so helpful to people who are starting out. So I’m delighted to be part of it again this year, with a workshop on how to write historical fiction.

And it’s free!  Details here.

Bendigo Writers Festival:  11 August

Bendigo Writers Festival 2019 logo

Another of my favourite festivals, in one of the most interesting areas of Victoria. This time, I’m chairing a session with two lovely writers: Kate Forsyth and Ilka Tampke. We’ll talk about researching the past, and knowing the three of us and our enthusiasm for the topic, they’ll have to drag us off stage with a shepherd’s crook. Details here.

I’ll also be quizzing the editor and some contributors of Kindred, a new anthology of YA queer stories, just out last month. I haven’t read Kindred yet, but I’m very much looking for to it, and to talking to Michael Earp, Claire G Coleman, Erin Gough and Nevo Zisin about their work. Details here.

Gender and Love conference: 25-27 September

In Spring, I’ll be back in South Africa for the Gender and Love conference and  doing more research for my YA novel, Roar, which is set in the late 1980s in London and Apartheid-era South Africa.

HNSA conference: 25-27 October

By October, the sun will be out again, and I’ll be in Sydney for the Historical Novel Society of Australasia conference at historic Parramatta. I’m teaching writers how to use Scrivener in a craft workshop  on the Friday, and then in the weekend program will be chatting with Sophie Masson about our approaches to writing for different age groups. And I’m co-convening the academic stream on the Sunday.

In between, I’ll be recording podcasts, teaching, attending some other writers festivals and events, moving house, releasing the new editions of  the Firewatcher Chronicles … oh, and finishing Vigil, book three of the series.

If I can just shake off this cold!

Three new book covers

 

Seeking Grace

Earlier this year, I was invited to give the keynote address at Brigidfest (Féile Bríde), an annual celebration of Irish women and their achievements, held at the Celtic Club in Melbourne.

I told the story of Grace O’Malley (Granuaile), and my research into her life for my novel -in-progress, Grace.

Late summer, 1593. Two of the most remarkable women of the age met for the first and only time.

Queen Elizabeth I was 60 years old, the autocratic ruler of one of the world’s great naval powers, a brilliant politician, patron of the arts, and one of the country’s most admired monarchs.

Grace O’Malley (Gráinne Ní Mháille, known as Granuaile) was a pirate and a dissident, known as the Queen of Connaught and the surrounding seas, and, according to Elizabeth’s governor, ‘nurse to all rebellions in the province for forty years.’

For decades, Grace and her fleet harassed Elizabeth’s ships, her personal army fought against the Crown, and she resisted all attempts to force her to behave in a more ladylike manner. With her sons killed or captured by the English authorities, Grace sailed to London to request a personal audience with Her Royal Highness.

The two women met at Greenwich Palace. Elizabeth dismissed all her courtiers and talked privately to the Irishwoman who’d rebelled against her. Nobody recorded what they said to each other. But Grace left the meeting with a pension and an order that her son could go free.

Grace is the story of that day, and of the two queens.

Here’s the speech, if you’d like to read the entire thing:

BrigidFest 2018 speech – Granuaile

Woodcut of Grace and ELizabeth meeting

Two queens meet: Anthologia Hibernica, vol. 11, 1793

Brimstone and the Blitz

The Firewatcher Chronicles are set during the Blitz in London, and in a very specific area by the banks of the Thames: Puddle Dock and the City, up to St Paul’s Cathedral.

Street sign - Puddle Dock

When I was first researching the books, I wanted to set them in a specific place that was affected by the many fires covered by the series. So it had to be somewhere inside the old Roman city but close to the riverbank. I wanted somewhere that’s not famous, just a place where the hero, young Christopher Larkham, and his family – normal working-class people – worked and lived and watched for fires during the Blitz. It had to be somewhere close to the river, so the kids can go searching the riverbank at low tide, and surrounded by those wonderful narrow, winding streets of the old city – streets with fabulous names like Addle Hill and Bleeding Heart Lane. This is how the area was laid out around the seventeenth century:

Puddle Dock map 17th century

I chose Puddle Dock because there are few traces now of the place it once was, and also I loved the name. This is how it looked in the 1940s, with the tide out and the dock itself filled with debris from bombed buildings:

Puddle Dock 1947

Here’s what that area looks like now, from across the river.

Puddle Dock form the south bank

I admit it’s not all that glamorous (besides that glorious cathedral, glowing in the evening light). Puddle Dock now houses a theatre, apartments and offices, and is tucked in between two busy roads.  There’s no dock any more. Great swathes of the City are like that, not just because it is still one of the great financial centres of the world and therefore filled with office blocks, but also because so much of the area was flattened in the Blitz.

Southwark bridge to Blackfriars in the Blitz

Brimstone, the first book in the Chronicles, takes place on  the night of 29 December 1940, when wave after wave of German air force bombers dropped 100,000 incendiary bombs, followed by more than 20,000 high explosive bombs and parachute mines, starting a series of fires that devastated the City.

That night became known as the Second Great Fire of London. Among the worst-hit areas were places burned in the first Great Fire of London  – Paternoster Square and the area around St Paul’s Cathedral, right down to the banks of the Thames, including many of the churches rebuilt after the Great Fire by Sir Christopher Wren. And much of the area around Puddle Dock.

St Paul's surrounded by bomb damage

Hundreds of years before the Blitz, on the night of 2 September 1666, the original Great Fire of London started in Pudding Lane.

This is how the city looked before the Great Fire (that big cathedral on the hill is old St Paul’s, where key scenes happen in Brimstone):

London from Southwark before the Fire

And during it:

Great Fire

How terrifying that must have been!

And here, hundreds of years later, is how the same area looked during that one night of the Blitz:

Herbert Mason's photo of St Paul's

This is Herbert Mason’s famous photo, ‘St Paul’s Survives’, one of the most iconic images from the Blitz, and taken on the night of 30 December 1940 – the night on which Brimstone is partly set. This photo meant so much to Londoners, and people across the world who were watching with horror as the Nazi attacked Britain and many other places. London had just copped a beating, but the cathedral was still standing – surrounded by smoke and flames.

So you can see what poor Christopher has to deal with in Brimstone, time-travelling between not just one but both of these enormous conflagrations.

And, perhaps, why I couldn’t resist writing a story about a kid who fights both of the great fires of London in one night.

 

Photo sources:

  • Imperial War Museum
  • Museum of London
  • Wikimedia 
  • A London Inheritance
  • Me.